I never met your sunsets,
I know you wanted me to,
You see I've got this asphyxiation mane,
It stops bright lights getting
Through.
Don't ask about the affliction,
I'm tainted, but then you knew;
"The world has damaged me"
Shade of my eyes
And a shell that's lost it's hue.
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie And Possible publishing. by creationsfromheart.
650 points, ended March 12, 2008, 41 entries
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Comments
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Well written & Versed--Excellent composition concerning a tragic subject--Well Done!
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wonderful! love it and best of luck in the Contest
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