Look into my eyes, veiled decline at dawn,
evicted succinct to thrilling passions
a clarity of lost second in largeness of ire,
scrapes vivid views of a simple light effort.
Shining moments in celestial sighs,
looks of saintly honour immortal,
behind retorts, adapted to leave,
to flicker oblique tilt to conquest.
Author notes
Picture Prompt
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie And Possible publishing. by creationsfromheart.
650 points, ended March 12, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Excellent
Very creative and well done. best of luck in the contest.
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On my second read I noticed
Did you mean honor? -
I love the metaphors and imagery you use here my friend best of luck in the contest
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aww very deep, thanks for the entry and good luck
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