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moored

moored ships await you
in harbours beyond the sky—
but you remain, whispering to stones
the thoughts you’ve long forgotten.

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bleh.

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  • Puking Faerie Dust gold member
    July 31, 2008

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    Boooyyaaaa this rocks You're so good at brevity it's not normal I love the word moored, too. The ending is titzz (which is xxscenexx for cool ) and yeah. Aweshome
    Jeanette*~


  • NeonRose
    April 6, 2008
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    This is beautiful..I want more. The last two lines are eerily provocative. Good write, poet.


  • birch
    February 15, 2008

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    I like that last image. At times it appears that they are the only ones who will listen.

    Justin

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