moored ships await you
in harbours beyond the sky—
but you remain, whispering to stones
the thoughts you’ve long forgotten.
Author notes
bleh.
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Comments
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Boooyyaaaa this rocks
You're so good at brevity it's not normal
I love the word moored, too. The ending is titzz (which is xxscenexx for cool
) and yeah. Aweshome

Jeanette*~

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i actually hate this one (*)_(*)
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and this one B===D
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mine's bigger! take that, ho!
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I can't find a way to make a butt
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This is beautiful..I want more. The last two lines are eerily provocative. Good write, poet.

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I like that last image. At times it appears that they are the only ones who will listen.
Justin
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