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moored

moored ships await you
in harbours beyond the sky—
but you remain, whispering to stones
the thoughts you’ve long forgotten.

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bleh.

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  • NeonRose silver member
    April 6
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    This is beautiful..I want more. The last two lines are eerily provocative. Good write, poet.


  • cake party
    February 15

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    I like that last image. At times it appears that they are the only ones who will listen.

    Justin

  • Aurora Ceres gold member
    February 14

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    There is freedom to be found in certain situations, when one surrenders....a lovely expression of just that.  Where is the obedience? Thank you so much....this is lovely...just incomplete..

    Bella