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Dead Demon






Love awakened, heart stronger, demon dead.









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  • brightXdarkness
    February 22, 2008

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    oooo wow I really like this one. It is almost refreshing to read which makes it that much more wonderful. Love has finally come, the heart has finally gotten stronger, and now the demon that has lived inside for all these years is finally dead. And the title helps improve the idea and all the emotions to make it that much more intense. I really like this one a lot. The best six words I think I've heard/read all day so far! Thank you so much for entering your refreshing poem into my contest, and the best of luck to you in my contest!!

    Alex


  • acari27 gold member
    February 20, 2008
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    i love that face picture makes me laugh


  • rhondasail
    February 13, 2008
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    Gotta say it...WOW...Best of luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda


  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 13, 2008

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    how true, this was a very sweet and nice poem, a true pleasure to read. =) so powerful with a short amount of words. best of luck in the contest =)
    stephanei