Sing me a lullaby
let's walk hand in hand
to a world of a fairy tale
take me to a wonderland
make my eyes put to sleep
sentence them to harmless kill
and have me surrounded by lullaby dreams
in a sky-high forest of autumn trees
A contest entry
- OPTIONS, PROMPTS AND TITLES by my1lovewearsdiapers.
600 points, ended March 4, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Bring Your Muse To LIfe! by Nighttime angel.
1200 points, ended February 29, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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That was so amazing beautiful. I loved all of it. The imagery was wonderful and the flow of the poem was flawless. The only thing that made me want to cry was you misspelled lullaby. It's with an a, not an u. Everything else was amazing. Thanks for this awesome read
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Hey! Thanks for the comment. I'm really glad u loved it.
I'll fix the misspelling right away .. just don't cry
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thank you for your entry.
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This is such a cute write, I thought about my son as I read this and about how only home made lullabyes sooth him again this is cute. Thank you for the entry ~T~
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A wonderful little lullaby, beautifully penned. Thank you for entering our contest and good luck
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Hey! thank you
glad to hear that
Lubna
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thanks I hope I'll do well.
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love this
great take with the quote
this was great
thank you for entering
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Hey, thanks. Glad u liked it
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What a sweet and tender piece of poetry
this is. Such descriptiveness and such
tenderness. wonderful job on this one.
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