The winters touch

this is so pretty! i just love the entire thing! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! NineTailedFox

nice alliteration. I like the phrase, "a snow maniken"

I spell it mannequin though. Maybe you are making a point with the spelling?

Hoping winter is nearly over and we will not have to deal with frostbite, or cold nights for another year. Double space after nipped in last line.

imagery and alliteration. Good job, although I also stumbled over the word baron. Seems to me that you meant barren as in bare .... and the way you have leave's spelled it would be a contraction for leave is if there was such a thing. just the word leaves is fine without an apostrophe. Not trying to be picky but I know you want your very best on here and sometimes spellcheck can't pick up these kind of things.

This is lovely and it has great imagery. It sets a beautiful winter scene, hard put to otherwise describe. I'm a bit confused, did you mean "barren" in L1, instead of "baron"? Just a question, not picking. "Baron" as you have it spelled, indicates a ranking or titled nobility. Just confused. Correct me if I am wrong.

This is really good, although I think it might need a little bit of revision. The line "a snow manikin is born" is really appealing to me just because I have a friend who's an art major and her subject was manikins... But, the line "autumnal leave's collide to the floor" is pretty bumpy, and leaves should not have an apostrophe. Thank you for sharing this with the group.

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On a second read here you have some misspellings and rooftops should be one word

PLease fix and I will be reading them again before final judging

Excellent

I admire the imagery and your awesome command of the English language!

What a wonderfully descriptive piece of
poetry! The word choices are amazing
and powerful. good luck in the contest.

Very nice lovely infact good luck in the contest