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I Love You

With thoughts of silky blossom
I feel your lip's passion kiss
And you falling like petals in my arms
In a moment of eternal bliss

This bouquet of love never existed before
Your incredible touch makes my heart bloom
Every pulse throbbing deeply inside
In fragrance of lovers perfume

You're my world's greatest garden
In which I gracefully dance
My heart's wings fly with you
Every moment, every chance

Living my soul's dream this way
Breathing every breath with you
Only you can make my valentine's day




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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 6, 2008

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    what a wonderful sharing you did while descrining the love and the beauty of the love of your life..love it..and my thanks for sharing such a warm poetry...


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    February 17, 2008

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    Very warm and loving words. This would definitely make a nice greeting card to a love done. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm

  • Virulent Malice
    February 13, 2008
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    The color scheme is painful.