green is the colour
genius love
life lifting
beyond envy
flying as a dove
true love contemplating
grass under our backs defy
all logic of creation
dark and sinister
make shift time pass
glass sharp as a knife
with green blood
dripping, wound pours flood
of emotion as the dagger
raised to the sky
its just us dying on
our wedding night
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A contest entry
- ~ Brilliant Bonechillers ~ >>Come N Play! by VoltaicHypnosis.
1750 points, ended March 4, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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Very interesting take on the picture and nice use of metaphors. Thank you for your entry in my contest!
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this is fantastic!
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thank you im glad you liked
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Great work but no evil. Good luck though ^.^
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AW, so sad...
Not very evil though, I must admit. Good work and luck
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