She sits there crying
The angel in the sky
She sits there dreaming
Love diddint pass her by
She sleeps just to dream him
Because he cant love her back
Her days are quite crazy
Everything fades to black
And she sits there crying
The angel in the sky
Nothing is quite as beautiful
And we ask ourselvs why
A contest entry
- picture prompt by Lexie -.
525 points, ended February 13, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PRE-WRITES ONLY!!! PRE-WRITTEN POEMS WHO SHOULD'VE WON A TROPHIE by Trill - Trickle.
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Comments
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Thanks!
And I havent really figured out the sight yet
I just joined a few days ago -
Amazing.
Maybe you coule explain something to me? i am coonfused, well my points keep going down, so for some reason, it will only let me do one applause!!
it was way better than that.
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very interesting
I could relate to everything, and i loved every part of it.
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great job
your word choice and rhyme are brilliant
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