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Lose the Key

Sanity is the key to boredom

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inspired by http://allpoetry.com/poem/3911621

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  • brightXdarkness
    March 2, 2008

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    It's TRUE!!!! Great poem! I am wondering though, why is it called, "lose the key?" My guess is that you are saying that we shouldn't be sane. That we shouldn't be bored. That we should be mad and crazy and have a blast in doing so. I am lovin it. Truly, it is great! Made me smile (which is difficult right now because I am having a difficult day.) But thank you for entering this poem into my contest and making me smile today! Best of luck to you in my contest too!!!

    Alex


  • workingharleylady
    February 13, 2008
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    Toche'

    Couldn't have spoken more true words myself here my dear poetess, very good job


  • ArmyRangerAngel
    February 13, 2008
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    short, sweet and ironically accurate


  • secberm
    February 13, 2008

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    LOL This is something to think about! Well done, lil sister. Good luck in the contest. Write on. One.

    Dez


    • luna-midnight gold member
      February 13, 2008
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      lol, im your little sis? =)
      hmm this poem isnt in the contest though, lol.
      stephanie


  • Southern
    February 13, 2008
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    Very well written

    Very nice and very true.

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