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Alongshore

You may never realize
as you take one step at a time,
at a leisurely pace
reflecting the past,
Remembering those happy days
as your eyes fill with tears,
visualizing the empty years
of not very long ago .
Don’t feel lonely,
I am with you;
Don’t lose heart,
I love you.
You may never see me;
But I shall always walk alongshore .

Author notes

i wrote this one years ago in the memory of my favourite uncle. he loved reading my poems, so this one is for him.

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  • DeadlyTurnip
    March 23, 2008

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    What a sweet dedication...Nice write, the spacing made the read very enjoyable. Thank you for entering.


  • paullallady silver member
    February 13, 2008

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    What a very sweet and tender piece of
    poetry about having someone who loves
    you by your side, whether they are here
    with us physically or not. a great piece
    of poetry. good job and good luck in the
    contest.