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erenn ynal

les callen
ætla

dalleð daþis sælrà
þan nu erenn ynal.

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the stones
intend

to give breath
to our desolate sky

Author notes

not a direct translation to english [i originally wrote it in sælré], but both versions are ten words. you're not going to understand the original [or pronounce it properly, meh] so sorry about that.

option: the picture.

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  • peridotPixi
    February 29, 2008
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    nice flow, thanks for the comments on my poem, i wrote it in 9th grade


  • my02U
    February 18, 2008

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    oh woweee

    this is amazing!
    i read your page and some of your poems, got all happy, read some of my poems, read your page again, and got sad: i think im one of those mediocre writing people who write poetry to vent. i was happy because... i was wondering... will you be my ap mentor? "i'm not afraid of making friends, i'm only afraid of rejection" can't remember who said that, but it applys, anyway.


  • blondone
    February 13, 2008
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    So ever thankful for authors notes deep emotions written thank you for entering