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The Stunning Beauty

My tonal quality  is just  dumb
My audibility became deaf
My eyes only stumble
at your angelic beauty
Your face resembles a moon light
Crystal clear features so bright.
If  creator, glances at you
He also feels numb in all senses

Irrespective of age
people look more crazy
not feeling  lazy

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Irrespective of age
people look more crazy
not feeling lazy

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  • creationsfromheart
    February 13, 2008
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    Thank you for this wonderful entry and Good luck in the contest