Love is a big illusion,
And life, a smart confusion.
Love is like a flower in bloom,
We don't know it's there, but we always assume
That love is there, just like a flower,
Stays for a day or stays for an hour,
All I know is love can be
Just a seagull out at sea.
And when we care, it could be an illusion
And we slowly go into dillusion.
When we find the one we love
We seem to drift like floating seeds above,
Like dandy-lion clocks in the air
Driftin here and drifting there
With no single ounce of care,
Love is an illusion, it is everywhere.
Love is like a flower in bloom,
Don't know it's there, but like an illusion we assume
That everything we do is real,
But unlike love that doesn't steal
Jewels of glory of our life
Together, when we feel no strife
So don't assume that love is real,
Sometimes it's an illusion, and seems surreal.
A contest entry
- Love is a big illusion and Life is a smart confusion by Purush.
550 points, ended February 27, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I thought this poem was a little all over the place. I can see your love of flowers in this which really shines through, but the is no set rhythm and images are scattered too much.
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A good attempt.All the best !
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all the best
verse nicely crafted with chosen words to suit the soul of the contest
all the best in my contest
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