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Stumbling

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Coffee grows cold,

stirred
by the second hand
of my watch,

as mind races
to escape the capture
of an ink doodled labyrinth.


Eyes flutter,
within an emotional free fall
of reflective thought,

and scribbled answers
trip desire

to stumble
through denial's threshold,


And still,
snowflakes fall, marking
the seconds lost
in my silence;

the absence,
     of whispered

            'I love yous'...




 

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  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    February 22, 2008
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    Very magical...took me on a great journey...

  • Everwind Rising
    February 16, 2008
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    So meloncholy, so beautiful. The sad emotion of this piece just embraced me.


  • suseann silver member
    February 15, 2008

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    Absolutely beauiful verse. Flawlessly scribed in a voice poetically decisive in terms of descriptivity.Well done Poetess!


  • Ahti
    February 13, 2008
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    Beautifully written.
    Saddening, yet powerful.
    Well done.


  • Moons Lunar Angel
    February 13, 2008

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  • Ryno
    February 13, 2008

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    Wow Bel, my first read from you in a while & that was fantastic. The ending was so simply powerful & I loved the emotion within the poem.


  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    February 13, 2008
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