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When there is nothing

What do I say, when there is nothing
Nothing to say, or do
Or hope for

I just keep my mouth shut
Stare at the ground
And hope

But for what?
Nothing is here

Friends, family

Love?

It is all gone

I am alone

There was a time
I loved life with a passion
I smiled everyday

But that was a time
A long time ago
Before there was nothing

Now, there is nothing

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I don't know where this came from... Completely not me. But it came straight out. Hope you like it.

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    February 13, 2008

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    Writing what is inside without interfering is often very eye opening!!! Very dark and lonely write, maybe not you but from somewhere inside you, perhaps a time you choose to forget. Thank you for the great entry and best of luck!

    Az


    • musik-freek
      February 14, 2008
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      Yeah, it felt like i was remembering a time when i was alone, i couldnt talk to anyone and everyone hated me... Thanks for the comment.