The sound of rain
falling upon the roof
wind sighing gently
through the trees
this is our background music
as you caress my cheek and
wipe away my tears
I would be your warm breath of spring
to ease away the winter chill
whispering my thoughts
in deepest night
invading your senses
to tantalise
with just a word or smile
Author notes
pearl-dragon
To keep this from descending into cliché the following words may not be used in this verse:
Adore
Cupid
Darling
Dear
Heart
Kiss
Love
Romance
Soul
Please limit your poem to 100 words.
Free verse or rhyme -- your choice.
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A contest entry
- Brevity is the Soul of Wit - Round Five (Invite Only) by CitrineSunrise.
600 points, ended February 18, 2008, 2 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This poem is gentle and peaceful and weaves a romantic mood. Thank you for your entry. Peace, Liz
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amazing work in choice words and less than 100 words, you did well in expressing, thank you for sharing and good luck..MM
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Thank you sweety, I appreciate your comment and applause.
Margaret
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This is amazing Margaret, so soft and sensual; like a whispered kiss.
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Thank you, Michael. I appreciate your comment very much. A whisper can sometimes say so much more than a shout.
Margaret
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You have definately created a mood, a feel,
with your words that is soft, sweet and
romantic. I really enjoyed this. good luck
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this is beautifully written and i love the usage of your words to create such a sweet and soft feel to this. well done auntie and best of luck
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Well penned sis
I hope you do well in this contest 
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the brevity within the poem speaks volumes, great and good luck xx
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