Inhale, absorb the fine aroma.
Titillating the senses.
Bliss coerced by traces
of heaven.
Closed eyes,
appreciating the essence of smell.
(C) Nichole A.Dustin
2/13/2008
Author notes
Contest 30 words or less.. prompt 'fragrant'
A contest entry
- Give me your best non-trophy. by lilblueeyesmine1978.
425 points, ended May 8, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
My mother taught me if you have nothing nice to say don't say it at all. We are not here as pros, we are here to share our art and have fun. *grin*
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
This is cool. i love the mental picture. THanks for entering and i hope to read more from you soon. good luck in the contest.
-
Wow you really nailed this, superb imagery. A gorgeous poem, flow is flawless. All the best in the contest with it
-
Your mother taught you well..."Bliss coerced by traces of heaven." I love this part. Excellent way to involve my senses. Good scene selection too. Well done and congrats...
-
smooth
I like that. very sweet!
-
what a beautiful way of explainging fragrance. great job!
-
Excellent job you can about smell the aroma..
-
This is a lovely piece, you have used the imagery well in this one
Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest, wishing you the best of luck
Karen
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
