Tears that flow from inside, I must hide.
Heartbroken, saddened by your choice,
I no longer have any real pride.
Since I have seen your voice,
I prayed and prayed for you my dear.
I truly adored you and did care.
You chose to freeze my soul
You broke the bond, our goal.
You left me with only loneliness here.
Loneliness, still guided by only fear,
Your body and mind betrayed me.
If only my eyes, erased, deprived, free.
Of the rapture, you had dealt me, new.
I may forgive but forgetting is untrue.
I saw you dancing with her in lust.
You said it was only animal must.
Your desires, were always, filled.
Between us, our love, now killed,
My rage surged, blinded for murder.
My passion withered becoming blinder.
Only my faith shadowed your judgment.
Now all my tears flow from abandonment.
A contest entry
- What Is She Thinking? (Pic Inspired) by Asylaarix.
425 points, ended March 8, 2008, 24 entries
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I gave you a silver that's right...Are you gay or just clever? I really enjoyed this one too

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Thank You
well maybe both and hopefully clever,bless you my dear,,blessings of laughter,light,life,and love...Firestorm
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This one is very very deep ... I loved the rhyme and flow of this ... it spoke such powerful words to me ... and to a point ... makes me feel as though this is a personal write ... it hits home with me ... very well done ... such a wonderful write ... good luck in the contest sweets ...
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Bless you sweetie
Thank you so kindy for your endearing words, I am so sorry to hear of your illness but I am as well happy that you are better,,blessings of light,life,loveand laughter..Firestorm
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