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The Jones's Story



He came,
He saw,
She conquered.

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Tell a story in 6 words.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 23, 2008

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    Hmmm whether this one is kind of metaphorical in its sense or an innuendo, I don't know. Even if not, I took it that way because that's who I am. Great way of writing this


  • brightXdarkness
    February 21, 2008

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    ooooo I like this one! It is kind of funny and makes me feel proud to be a woman. It humors me how funny this actually is because this is something that is so true. This is something that would actually happen every day in real life, so this story can actually go along with any idea any setting, anything. These six words are very well crafted, and I am impressed with this outcome! Keep writing, you are good at it. Thank you very so much for entering my contest, and good luck!!

    Alex


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    February 13, 2008

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    love, isn't it the grandest thing.
    Nice job sweetie.


  • luna-midnight silver member
    February 13, 2008

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    ahhaha yay! i love the "she conquered" go women =)
    wonderful write here. it was very enjoyable to read, and best of luck in the contest.
    stephanie =)