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Cry You To Life


CRY YOU TO LIFE

I pray to goddess, gods and devils;
they refuse me any deal.
I sing songs and I cry and I stumble;
but still you don't become real.
If you'd just come to life,
when I held your clothes;
I'd sink in your eyes,
play games with your toes.
I'd savor your every scent.
Inhale you with greedy breath.
Make up for every moment spent;
that we will never spend.

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  • Victim Of Violence
    November 6, 2008

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    It was a very special poem. And beautiful as well. I loved the line: ' Inhale you with greedy breath'. It just explains something in a different, powerful way. =)