The night has come and gone and I awake with you beside me.
The sun, I watched it peaking through my curtains and warming the air that filtered through my window.
Robins sang in praise of the new day and gave merit to the sun for bringing them warmth.
I too love the warmth, but it is not of the sun.
These sheets- ashen and crumbled know not the cold.
Neither does this body.
For I spent the night cradled in your arms knowing only you as my blanket.
To wake now and perceive your face being graced by the early morn rays...
Is truly Heaven...
And to watch those beautiful eyes escape the darkness behind those lids...
And gaze so contently into mine...
Well love...’tis truly Paradise...
A contest entry
- Paradise by Red widow.
600 points, ended February 14, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I Need To Read by poets whisper.
900 points, ended September 14, 2009, 77 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I rushed it
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congrats on the gold and thank you for entering the contest. Softly sensual and filled with soft imagery.
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Bravo
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eek! thanky hun!
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Wonderful I LOVE IT definately my favorite i comend you on a truly wonderful piece!
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EEK! I WON!!! lol thank you oh gosh. I didn't even think this one would win 'cause I rushed it and thought it well...weak. THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!!!! lol you made my day. Thought about my Boyfriend when i wrote it so...Thank you baby!!!!!
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