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Between The Lines [6 Words]




I'd never change one lost battle.




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  • brightXdarkness
    February 21, 2008

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    oooo I like this poem. It is bold and brave. It definitely stands out from the others (so far)! These six word poems continue to amaze me in that they have so much meaning behind each word. And this poem reminds me of myself too in that I too would never "change one lost battle." I would never go back in time and change something. because I know that what I have gone through in the passed has made a big part in who I am today. I am not sure if that is the same as your reason, but either way, it's a really good thing to have that idea. Keep writing! Thank you for entering my contest, and good luck!!

    Alex


  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 13, 2008

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    great job, strong words and so few. =)
    good luck in the contest, and with the rest of your writitng =)
    stephanie


    • Jessi-desensytized
      February 13, 2008
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      thanks very much glad u liked it... i thought it was a great idea for a contest!! i had a lot of fun tryin to find just 6 words though lol most of the ones i was comin up with were 7 words