Gathering mists of opulent wildflowers,
autumny chill of scented breeze wakes
from carbony depths, of plentiful tress,
as I lie, watching you smile, in your sleep.
Author notes
Prompt: Fragrance.
Oh, but was there ever a fragrance more captivating, than the scented breeze rising from the hair of a loved one?
A contest entry
- Word Prompt: 30 words by Kuranya.
375 points, ended February 13, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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what terrific imagery you have here.
this is wonderful. I really enjoyed
it. good luck in the contest. -
Ahh this is divine... I have to agree, nothing more captivating... beautiful
Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest, wishing you the best of luck
Karen
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