My shoes are dirty, yet perfect.
A contest entry
- 6 Words by brightXdarkness.
600 points, ended March 10, 2008, 70 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Love it, Love it, Love it!!!!!!! This poem is great (and even describes mu shoes perfectly). I am going to use this comment to not talk about your poem, but rather to rant on about stuff because I am that tired. I want these costum convers's, but it won't happen. My computer freezes whenever I go on the website. It is quite terrible, isn't it? I mean, what am I going to do without seeing how ugly those shoes can look? Anyway, I really love the whole tone of this poem. Especially the end is good. I mean, "dirty, yet perfect." It could also be taken metaphorically, for example, my girlfriend is dirty, yet perfect (AW, how cute!) hehe. Um yeah... I hope you had fun entering my contest, and thank you for entering my contest, and good luck!!
Alex -
ahha i bet they are =P
great write, and good luck in the contest =)
stephanie
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