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Watching Him Die


Toe-tagged:

Empty bottles,

a wasted life~


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  • brightXdarkness
    February 20, 2008

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    Wow, I really like this poem. It reminds me of a lot of people I know, and it makes me really sad. It really sucks when you see them throwing their lives away and yet you know that there is nothing that you can do. This poem is very intense and very emotional or it carries a lot of emotion anyway. I feel pretty bad about one thing in this poem. What does "toe-tagged" mean? I tried to look it up in my little pocket dictionary, but I couldn't find it. You know the great thing about this poem? The empty bottles could have been filled with anything. Pills even. This is another poem that could be taken in so many directions. I really like it! Thank you for entering my contest, and good luck!!

    Alex


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    February 13, 2008
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    Wow, my father died this way.

    Nice entry friend.


    mj.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 13, 2008

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    wow! this is very powerful and such few words, love title, all the words, and everything, good luck in the contest =)
    stephanie