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LIFE IS HARD, BUT LIVE IT.

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  • brightXdarkness
    March 2, 2008

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    Very bold. Very true. Very brave. I love this poem. It is great. I love how it's almost commanding me what to do. It's basically telling me, "well, deal!" You can't change life, only the way you live it. But first thing is that you have to choose to live it first! That's the hardest part too... but you commanded it very well! thank you for this poem, it was a great ending to my night! Thank you so much for entering your bold poem into my contest, and the best of luck!!

    Alex


  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 17, 2008
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    awwww, great job, very strong point, good luck in the contest and best wishes.
    stephanie =)


  • parntsoftwins
    February 13, 2008

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    Short, honest and straight to the point!!! I agree wholeheartedly. No matter what life may bring your way, it may be hard, but, live life the best you can. Never give in or give up!! Had I done that, I probably wouldn't be here. Hugs~Nikki