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Old Flame

Living a simple lie,
OF love so profane.
Hoping to survive,
Just to die again.

She is now so far away,
So many things I should've done.
3000 k's away,
We never can be one.

I want to love again,
Yet I cannot but I try.
Keep her face inside my head,
A photographic smile.

She speaks within my dreams,
As I lay in fitful sleep.
I try forget about her,
But my wounds are way too deep.

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  • fairytalelovestory
    February 27, 2008
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    this poem represents alot of what im going through right now, thx for ur entry good luck.


  • nobody knows me
    February 23, 2008
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    Thankyou for entering my contest good luck x