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Pre-Birth

Dad did.  Mom didn't.  I'm here.

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  • brightXdarkness
    February 18, 2008

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    Wow. This almost made me want to cry. These are some very intense six words. I was raped, so I can feel how it may be on your mom's side... and the way you must feel (although not written here, it is in the subtext, I think anyway) is also very powerful. It is stated so bluntly and I think that that is definitely what adds a lot of impact to the writing. This is really very great. Keep writing, you seem to be very good at it! Thank you for entering my contest, and good luck!

    Alex


  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 13, 2008
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    lol. this is aweosme! geat job, and good luck in the contest. =)
    stephanie