does there exist a world of grace
where when you fall on your face,
you won’t fear to be tread upon in sin
from people to hastily reach selfish ends?
Why run the rat race?
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The title of this poem first attracted my attention and I had to reread it a few times to let it sink in. I think it's a great write - staight and to the point.
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Glad you liked it!
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Cool! You haven't been on in a while and it's nice to see a new poem up. I think it's short and too the point, which is how I like poetry. Great job!
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