His eyes could be
As cold as ice and
As temperamental as the ocean
Or could his eyes be
As warm as the firelight and
As soft as the melody to our favorite song
His lips could be
As rough as the sea and
As greedy as a spoiled child
Or could his lips be
As smooth as the night sky
And as true as love
His kiss could be
Forceful and demanding
Always taking and never giving
Or could his kiss be
Romantic and sensual
Giving me a rush of emotion
I wish would never end
His hands could be
As hard as rock lying on the forest floor
Or could his hands be
As soft as a fluffy cloud floating in the mid-day sky
His heart could be
A heart of stone
Barely able to feel
slowly carcking and breaking
Or his heart could be a virgin
Untouched by pain and heartache
Able to love and feel
His love for me could be
Hidden
When he looks into my eyes
Felt only when he holds me close
Or could his love for me be
Seen when he looks into my eyes
Felt when he wraps his arms around me
Holding me tight
A contest entry
- Valentine's Day -love is in the air by Suna Ketsuma.
530 points, ended March 2, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hit me with your best shot by De-Throned.
450 points, ended February 20, 2008, 33 entries
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350 points, ended March 17, 2008, 143 entries
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Comments
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Good write. It kinda dragged on a bit. My favorite part was:
His love for me could be
Hidden
When he looks into my eyes
Felt only when he holds me close
Or could his love for me be
Seen when he looks into my eyes
Felt when he wraps his arms around me
Holding me tight
Good luck in the contest.
De-throne -
thats beautiful, i wonder which he is? I love what you said about the kiss "his kiss could be forcefull and demanding, taking and enver giving" that line made me think of a spoiled child so i laughed slightly, but its a great write!
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