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Beyond The Veil

As angels beckons me,
I await you to join
with me beyond the veil.
Love is a kiss away.

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A friends wife died last night after suffering from ill health. He loved to build furniture and I can image her floating away to a better place.

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  • Kelli Marie
    February 20, 2008

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    Congratulations on the gold trophy. You definitely deserved it. I enjoyed the read very much. You did a great job.
    Kelli


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    February 13, 2008
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    A beautiful write but such a sad inspiration. Congratulations on the Gold.
    Soulful Woman


  • Sandygram silver member
    February 13, 2008

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    This was beautiful poem. Such a lovely way to honor her passing. Thank you for sharing. Bless you. Sandy


  • Wandika gold member
    February 13, 2008

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    Beautiful

    I have a friend also whose wife died last weekend after a long bout with cancer.
    These words say it all for a true love.


  • AddictiveTRUTH
    February 12, 2008

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    Im very sorry to hear of your friends' loss

    however, this piece was amazing, very well penned. Good luck, and thank you so much for entering my contest.

    E♥

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