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I Will Be

I saw what you've done,
How well you've advanced.
You have surpassed me.
My skill means little
Compared to yours,
But not for long,
For I will be...

You've done well so far,
But you didn't know
How I would react.
Well open your eyes,
I am before you
And I pass your judgement
For I will be...

Inspiration is my fuel
And you have provided.
For this I thank you,
But I cannot spare you,
For as I have said
I will be...I am
The best

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~Tha Light Poet~

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  • Ms-Mouse
    March 17

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    I think you might be the best one day? But then I'll have to come and stamp on y'keyboard and prod your CPU with a nail file!


  • PrettyLilBullet
    February 12, 2008

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    Brilliant!

    A wonderful poem! So very much in your style. And you got the message out loud and clear. Great job!


  • gothicchildren05
    February 12, 2008

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    this is a good piece but I do not understand what you mean when you messaged me. how does this have a message for me? I am trying to figure that out!!!