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A Lack of Oxygen

Why must every articulation of love
be thrown into the trash labeled cliche.
Every time one whispers words of devotion
a second thought must occur in the flattered
the perception of true love being distorted
making self expression nothing but taboo.
For fear of rejection, one holds one's breath.
Only to find out that they have reached
exactly what they have been so avidly avoiding.

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  • toomysterious
    February 17, 2008
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    I loved this you know, but you don't have enough poems on here. I ran out of things to read. You must write more, you have such talent.


  • toomysterious
    February 16, 2008

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    Your way with words amazes me. Once again you have caught the essence of love (there are so many kinds) and trapped it on paper. Love your titles, too.

  • XxCrazyBabexX
    February 15, 2008
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    HMMMMM

    im to tired to think

    awesome write


  • Urban-Nomad
    February 14, 2008

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    "Why must every articulation of love
    Be crumpled and thrown into the trash labeled cliche" I dig that line man you got some talent