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Going Back To Her

I have thrown you away from life
Yet that doesn't stop me
From making this honest confession
That your presence made a lot of difference to me.

Thinking of those wonderful times
That we shared in our lives
My heart gets heavy
And i wonder if i made a mistake

May be i should not have
Stopped this correspondence
May be i should have been
More patient than i am

But then again when thoughts
Of my previous heart breaks
Come to my mind..
I think i made the right decision

I do not have any more guts
In me to have you back in life
And be hurt by you once again
But still the pain you gave me is sweet

An honest confession is this
I really miss you-
More than words could express.
More than you could even imagine

Yet i don't want you back;
Or on second thoughts
Do i want you back
Am i confused???

I thought- like a man i should behave
And tell you the truth;
And so i have said it.
Now you just read it and forget it.






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  • baawri
    July 23
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    Cool

    It is written using my words, I want to have compensation for it

    • nirmal
      July 23
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      now way.. i have not stolen anybody's words.,. these words are mine.. i wrote the poem.. did not copy it from anyone.. How dare you call me a copy cat


  • angel-lover
    May 5, 2008
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    sounds like a deep write very well placed together keep writing love your work take care from angel

  • baawri
    February 23, 2008

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    Amazingg

    It is so beautifully written dear Nirmal. I am so happy to read this.This story matches with one friend of mine and my relationship with him. It was successful in making me emotional. Keep it up.

    • nirmal
      February 27, 2008
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      hey stupid shivani.. dont you remember this poem... its the same that i sent to you after a hiatus in our contacts

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