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Our Circle Feels Complete

My oh my Tom Brady's fine,
Obama's quite a charmer.
Garnett's got height
he's quite a sight
on parquet he's the bomber.

But only you can make me sigh
when I look into your eyes
soft and blue
shine I love you,
your smiling eyes don't lie.

You still give me goosebumps
with your kisses soft and sweet.
When you hold me in your arms
Our circle feels complete.


Joyce Josephson




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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    February 20

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    Beautifully Sensual & Romantic!!

    Thank you for your wonderful Valentine's Day entry in my contest!! I'm wishing you all the best!! Peace, xx Cyn


  • Chocoholic156
    February 8

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    lol, this made me laugh, you have nice comparisons and a very sweet feel to the second stanza. You have done a magnificent job with this poem, good job, and keep writing.


  • rose petal desires
    May 24, 2008

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    wow what a lovely piece you did a very great excellent job with this thanks for sharing and have a nice time in the contest with the others


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    February 17, 2008

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    LOL, cute. Gave the giggles, but the ending is just so right. Great work with this. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    February 12, 2008

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    Oh sis this is so beautiful! It made me laugh and sigh! But I know a secret, you are a pro at this! Good luck in the contest.

    Jeannie

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