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Heart broken

Heart Broken
(Gabriel David Rompf)

Here again for the many times I have felt sad
I am heartbroken
I am dreamless
I am living in the dark, pretending to be with you
I am living in the shadow thinking of you
There is no light in my life I said
There is only a path, a path that goes no where
I gave my life away like trash
I gave my heart away when I was mad
Today like many days I feel sad
I feel depressed and thoughtless
There is only one thing on my mind and that is you
I feel obsessed with everything you do
I have never felt this so strong for a person
And like “In the end” says
I tried so hard
I got so far
But in the end it is worth crap

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  • Til the Day I Die
    March 26, 2008

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    wow

    this is a feeling i know personal...i felt this way until about two mounths ago when i met my perfect boyfriend who loves me...so this is a wounderful write


    • Rompf
      March 28, 2008
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      this is so fuking pathetic seriously I wish I had never written this poem I wish I had never written poems I hate my self for it its a bad memory

      • Til the Day I Die
        March 28, 2008
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        hey

        little buddy, calm down...1) never regret writing something and 2) this is good you wrote something people can relate to....look I'm sorry I didn't mean to up set you by saying iliked it.....look here if you privit message me We'll talk more okay...I'm realy sorry you feel this way


  • Mysterious chick
    February 14, 2008

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    wow!!

    this aint a great poem this is better than that!!! i loved it! i dont knw u much but i like to listen to ppls problems and try to help them so if u ever need to talk i will be ther trust me i am not lying i will really be there for you....


  • Athronofaredrose
    February 12, 2008
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    wow...

    Great poem

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