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A Life Surreal

Pretty poetic paradise
Burning fingertips on the pen
Melting into fire, ice
Ruined writers' reality
Find what merges perfectly
Together and totally alone
Fueling a vision that isn't your own
Perfume of the pencil piercing the page
Love bleeding from hands
Hearts screaming in rage
The way the world looks
From behind this mascara
A poetic Cupid shooting arrows
This is the sensation I feel
A writer is a life surreal.

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 13, 2008

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    Amen, amen that is what i think about his Amen, you know as i read this it makes me smile. this is a great job, i love that last line there,"A writer is a life surreal" . keep it flowing