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Guilt

Did you see the carcass
Right as it died
The blood so viscous
The face glass-eyed

Have you ever felt it
Take over your mind
But you’d never admit
Your desire to rewind

How did it feel
To see her there
Was it surreal
That she lay bare

She was stripped
No sign of life
Because she slipped
On your jackknife

So why do you lie
If you’re not to blame
And why do you cry
When you hear her name

You knew of the knife
And you didn’t say
Your crimes are rife
On your soul they weigh

You could have changed it
Had you really tried
You chose to omit
You weren’t her guide

Now she’s dead
And so is your soul
The tears you shed
Won’t fill that hole

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  • nobody knows me
    February 23, 2008
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