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Me + You = Escape

Run! Hurry they're coming for us
Don't give up lets go
We don't know who we can really trust
And who we are we will never know

Grab my hand lets runaway
We are only judged here
Lets go find a real place to stay
Where we can hide from all our fears

We are hated for trying to love
People are so closed minded
They never knew that by trying to look above
They would become blinded

Come on, lets go just you and me
Where we can never shed tears
Where me and you can be free
And there we'll stay from all this torment and sneers

We'll find a place so hidden from sight
Where we could stay forever
I will hold on to you with all my might
With the love no knife can sever

Author notes

This is just in the middle of school writing, so I'm sorry if its not good.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 23, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Wow. This is passionately penned; I love the real emotions that pour from this. It is sad to think that this is true for so many people.

    Fantastic write


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    ~Manda