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"Love"

"Love"
The word echoes in my mind
My heart listens well to the reverberation in the room

"Love"
The word breathes life into me
My heart sings as I understand for the first time

"Love"
The word is beautiful
The meaning of the word, however, is more beautiful then the blooming rose

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I hope you get the message I'm sending, here. Many of you may not. Thanks for reading my poem!

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    February 17, 2008

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    Very nice writing. Love most definitely can be a wonderful thing. This says as much. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 12, 2008

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    this is such a beautiful piece baby girl and i sure did get the message.you have such a beautiful talent well done love from your god moma