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To You...

I just happened to stop and think on day,
that maybe now was the time to say
the way I feel about you.
Well here I go. Don't laugh! It's all true.

You make my heart sing, and I feel like I'm flying.

When I'm with you, I'm never afraid. Not even of dying.

Nothing will change that you like up my world.

And so my tail has almost unfurled.

You make me feel happy, alight, and aglow.

Well I guess that's all. Just thought you should know.

Author notes

If I could I would send this to the person it's meant for. But soooooo not happening. Anyway... I know it's a bit sappy and played out, but that's how greeting cards are supposed to be. Right? Hope you liked it.

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    February 17, 2008

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    Cute verses. One way to let someone special know what you feel. You did good with this. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm