Making love
Skin on skin
The caress of your eyes
again and again
Fires ignite
passion all night
I feel you in my toes
no measure to how deep
this ache goes
Your hands
I feel them everywhere
On top of my clothes
Oh! Beneath my underwear
Can't breathe
The need is so great
Making love
No way to wait
Our bodies urgently press
As our hands eagerly undress
The kiss deepens
and lingers
We melt beneath one
another's fingers
Destiny unites as two
bodies become one
Making love as brilliant
as the golden sun
Smiles gently grace
each face
As we lie locked together
in one another's embrace
Making love
Skin on skin
Make love to me
making love to you
Again and again
Author notes
This piece is deeply personal. I wrote it for a gentleman who stole my heart and set all of my passions ablaze! This was written in anticipation of what might have taken place had we allowed ourselves to go this far! I left out the " politcally correct," punctuation as it is meant to be read the way it is felt....in one continuos stream of never sated desire!
Sharing this for the first time makes me a bit nervous as this is an area of my heart that still needs TLC! He was a very special man and I doubt I will ever meet anyone else like him!
option:
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will be part of my book
In a list
A contest entry
- Sexual seduction (pics) by joleahe.
300 points, ended April 2, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Have you ever known someone who just made you drip with desire?
Comments
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a very sting yet tebder write that carries the reader along at love's pace.
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very good job...very passionate and sweet...great..thank you
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amazing.absolutely amazing. congrats for describing every detail well. nice piece. beautiful.
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I love this, it has a great flow and perfect intensity.
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Thank you for reading and commenting! You all have made me smile tonight!
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Awesome and intense emotion
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Thank you!
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A beautiful and tastefully done piece. I always believe the less is more in this sort of write and you've done it well. Great flow too
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Thank you!
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A Sad Piece...
but the yearning here in this is expressed so exellent!! It is sensual without being vulgar or too graphic as you say these moments are personl even though you did not get to share your "love" with this gentleman. I love the rhymes and the imagery is magnificent as well leading the reader all the way through your journey of the heart. Ihope you two get a second chance down the road or some other gentleman graces your life and ends up being "The One" Thanks for sharing this romantic piece with me tonight!!!~~Toni~~
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There is a part of me that will always long for him but alas one must move on! Thanks for reading and for your comment!
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This is romance on a stick, wish it could be bottled,the raw emotions and sensations just jump off the page..WELL DONE!
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I'd be a much wealthier woman if it could be bottled! Thanks for stopping by to read and comment! I appreciate it!
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Wow, all this and nothing ever took place! Yes I have felt like that for a certain person who I never got that close to and I know just what the imagination and dreams can do, but it is just not enough. To heck with the punctuation, this is full of real feelings. Well done.
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Thank you so much! No, we never did go to the heights of this poem but he sure knew how to make one imagine it! In then end it wasn't enough!
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