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The way I felt that night you left...

So I know we weren’t serious
But I still cared a lot
I knew we wouldn’t last forever
But I didn’t care, I was happy with what I had got.

You’re the person I think about day and night
You’re the reason I’ve been smiling so much
The only things on my mind are
Your cuddles, your kisses, your touch.

But now I don’t have that
Not even a nighty night text
It’s sad how much it made me smile
When I used to read your texts

But now it’s over
And I read them to remind me of you,
They make me smile as I think of the good times
But make me miss you so I cry a little too.

I miss the texts you used to send
I miss the sound of your voice down the line
They used to make me feel so special
Like I was yours and you were mine.

I miss the way you held my hand
The way you kissed my lips
I miss the way you cuddled me
Your hands around my hips.

Now all I want is one last kiss
A goodbye kiss, a farewell kiss
Now all I want is to hear your voice
And tell me it’ll all be okay.

Author notes

I wrote this through my tears the night I split with someone who meant so much to me..

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  • Heather.x
    March 13, 2008
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    heya sis thanks its weird bein back on here lol. speak tu yuu soon xxx


  • Cheeky paper
    March 9, 2008
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    Oh my sweet sister,

    I am very sorry I was not there for you when you needed someone to talk to. Are you alright?
    This poem is sad indeed, and believe me,I know how does it feel when you lost someone special and know that you may not get them back again. Be strong sweetheart, sharing your emotions & feelings here with us

    <3 keep on writing a good job.

    Paper