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Affliction On You

I've fallen now,
Though it's not my fault.
I've succumbed to the only truth.
In lands near, far, I spread my terror,
And watch as dreams are slaughtered.
I've brought the pain of loss
To everything I see.
I've murdered members
Of all the families
I've longed to take me in.
I've destroyed the hopes
Of parents, for daughters
Though I was desperate to change the fates.
I've been given these powers
To bring death to life
Against my fading will.
Not long now
I'll have given up
And my wrath will release at full strength.
Hell will stalk my unconscious friends
And death will revive again.

Author notes

I think I'm a death omen.

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  • nobody knows me
    February 23, 2008
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    Thankyou for entering my contest good luck x


  • Anti-Saint
    February 22, 2008

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    Great poem, wonderful feel. YOU ARE NOT A FREAKING DEATH OMEN! shit happens, okay? don't blame yourself because people around you die. it happens to everybody. i love you sweetie, and it's not your fault.