I just wrote to say I love you
Your energy, your bliss
Your shining eyes, your sparkling smile
Your tender touch, your sweet kiss
I just wrote to say I need you
To stay here and hug me tight
To wrap your love around me
And hold me through the night
I just wrote to say I miss you
Your voice comes into mind
Your gentleness surrounds me
As our passion slowly unwinds
A contest entry
- I Just Wrote, to Say, I Love You by StormGoddess.
450 points, ended February 17, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very nice. This wold give the inside of a greeting card a wonderful voice. Great work with it. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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I think that you need to have a little more faith in yourself. There was absolutely no reason for your comment on the contests description nor is there any reason to remove this... it is lovely. Best of luck in the contest.
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Well done Sweetheart. Guardian Angels are here to watch over you and that's what I shall do. Your poem is beautiful and should stay in the contest. My friend, who is my Guardian Angel when I need one sent you a message asking you to keep your poem here and I hope you will take his advice.
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BEAUTIFUL
Hello Abidoodle,
I have just finished reading your poem, and wish to tell you, just how much I have enjoyed the read.I could see within your written words,love for someone special beautifully expressed.Your words flow with a passion that shows endless love. This poem is a beautiful write of love! Thank you for sharing,I enjoyed the read very much.Best wishes to you in the contest.
Take care and many blessings to you.
Angel.
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oh baby girl this is such a beautiful piece and i love the depth and emotionin your words. you have such a talent. well done love yfrom your god mommy
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