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Oh how I loved you.

Oh how I loved the walks by the sea,
Oh how I liked the times of you and me,
All the world was our oyster to eat,
All the people we always used to meet,
I remember the times like I remember you
It makes me feel happy, and yet a little blue
For you were the one there in my life so cheerful,
But when I think of you it makes me a little tearful.
You were the love that I once loved,
You were the one who made me feel beloved,
All those times we sat drinking tea,
The time for you, the times for me,
We sat at breakfast for half an hour
Feeling that there is so much time or ours.
I loved it how you cracked the boiled egg
On the top with the teaspoon, like humpty dumpty's head,
Oh how it used to make us laugh
And then you had to choose another path
For you had to leave me, you said goodbye,
You took my hand and you make me cry,
You went when the wind called thy name,
You went with the tide that gave me pain,
You went away, you went far and wide,
And oh the lonely tears I cried,
I cried for you, I cried for me,
I cried for the walks we used to take along the sea,
No more breakfast in the morning,
No more times together talking,
You took my heart away with you
And I really didn't know what to do,
But as each day passed by the by
I got a little better, did I.
I found a little courage, I found a little hope,
I found it from a place that I can cope.
And now I miss you, but I get on with my life,
I do not feel such horrible strife.
You're here in my heart,
Even though we are apart
And I still love you, I really do,
But I miss the times of me and you.

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  • Tarja
    February 12, 2008

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    Well... the rhyming seemed a bit forced and the flow was kind of choppy... but I think that overall this wasn't too bad... I can relate to this very much... I think you would do well adding some more imagery though.