Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Why have you forsaken me?

Why have you forsaken me?
You have brought me to my knees,
Please just end it now,
You already have my heart dripping with tears and fear in your hands,
You look at me with sorrow and dismay,
Please just end my day,
You think you are helping me, healing me,
But you just need to walk away,
You are wounding me more,
Just take my life,
I dont want to suffer in your arms any more,
You have me locked up like a caged animal,
But now I have broken free,
Nevermore,
You will no longer hurt me, or wound me,
For I have been set free from your chains of death,
And instead of me its you who will suffer
Forever.

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • Bob Fox
    September 11, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    Chains

    Often those inivisible chains can strangle us. perhaps a realise is needed and a liittle light just may appear.

  • Bob Fox
    March 31, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    The anguish

    The anguish and pain often associated with love can leave one feeling crippled and hopeles. But fear not your words are heard and your beauty shines.


  • individuality gold member
    March 28, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    wal away - walk?
    a sad poem - love and life and the madness it brings at times, the future holds hope though with smiles


  • poetwomen
    February 12, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    Wow

    Thats like one of my poems. I love it