I feel nothing
Nothing matters
I wath the world go by
I used to love
I used to laugh
Befoer you held me near
Now I see you
And your perfet little life
And I watch
Dying deep inside
Do you see
These empty eyes?
This dead soul
That lies inside?
Do you see
My blank stare?
At your family
Over there
Smiling happy
I hate you
I hate you all
You will die
I shalln't cry
And I will
Finally
Once again
Smile
A contest entry
- the black hole were your soul used to be by nobody knows me.
750 points, ended February 23, 2008, 39 entries
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Comments
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Quite a deep write I must say. You certainly put your very heart and soul into this. I'm impressed. Keep up the good work.
Brian -
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Thank You.
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