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A Star

Falling stars carry lanterns
shinging bright with illusions
of luck and hope

When nightfall comes,
the sky is illuminated
with wishes worldwide.

I wish...
for a night, that never
ends.

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30 words (option 4)

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 12, 2008

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    This is so beautiful!
    You did a great job putting this one
    together. I love the imagery and feel
    of this one. All the best to you with
    this piece in the contest!




    Jeremy0826


  • Jade-
    February 12, 2008

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    I agree -- you managed to say a lot with the 30 words. It's a pretty poem. I really like it.

    Thanks and good luck!


  • Kelli Marie
    February 12, 2008

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    You said a lot with a mere thirty words. I love the graphic. I enjoyed the read very much. I hope you do well in the contest.
    Kelli